Can you correct my text?

"Rhodopis and golden sandals

Once upon a time, there lived a rich merchant, called Snefru, in a place called Manf/ Memphis. Snefru live with his wife and daughter "Rhodopis / Radobee . Radobee's mother felt her death approaching, so she said to Radobee, “You're so pretty and after my death, your father will remarry another woman and gives birth to daughters, and that daughters will be jealous of you.”
Then she gave Radobee a wooden box. There was a necklace of Hathor and a very special shoes/golden sandals. because the shoes only fit her feet and necklace will protect Radobee. She told Radobee to take good care of them. After her mother death, her father remarried another woman. The stepmother and her daughters mistreated Radobee.
Meanwhile, the king held a big party to find a good wife for his son to carry on his royal lineage. But the stepmother locked Radobee in her room. And sent her biological daughters only to the party. .”

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Can you correct my text?

"Rhodopis and golden sandals

Once upon a time, there lived a rich merchant, called Snefru, in a place called Manf/ Memphis. Snefru live with his wife and daughter "Rhodopis / Radobee . Radobee's mother felt her death approaching, so she said to Radobee, “You're so pretty and after my death, your father will remarry another woman and gives birth to daughters, and that daughters will be jealous of you.”
Then she gave Radobee a wooden box. There was a necklace of Hathor and a very special shoes/golden sandals. because the shoes only fit her feet and necklace will protect Radobee. She told Radobee to take good care of them. After her mother death, her father remarried another woman. The stepmother and her daughters mistreated Radobee.
Meanwhile, the king held a big party to find a good wife for his son to carry on his royal lineage. But the stepmother locked Radobee in her room. And sent her biological daughters only to the party. .”

msblueringed · Answer

"Rhodopis and the Golden Sandals”

Once upon a time, there lived a rich merchant, named Snefru, in a place called Manf, Memphis. Snefru lived with his wife and daughter, Rhodopis and Radobee. When Radobee's mother felt her death approaching, she said to Radobee, “You're so pretty. After my death, your father will remarry and give birth to more daughters, and those daughters will be jealous of you.”
Then she gave Radobee a wooden box. There was a necklace of Hathor and very special shoes—golden sandals. Because the shoes only fit her feet, her mother promised those sandals and necklace would protect her from harm. She told Radobee to take good care of them. After her mother’s death, her father did indeed marry another woman. The stepmother and her daughters mistreated Radobee.
Meanwhile, the king held a big party to find a good wife for his son to carry on the royal lineage. However, the evil new stepmother locked Radobee in her room and sent her own daughters off to the party. .”

msblueringed · Answer

While Radobee was bathing in the pond, slowly losing all hope, an eagle stole her sandals sitting alone. By chance, the shoes fell from the sky into the prince's lap. As soon as the prince saw the sandals, he became curious about how pretty the owner of these heavenly shoes might be, so he decided to find the owner of the pair.
After some time, he arrived at Radobee's house, but the stepmother would not allow Radobee to wear the sandals and only addressed her a maid. Still, the prince allowed Radobee to wear it, and once Radobee saw them, she cried “These are the sandals my mother gave before she died!” and she brought another pair. Once the prince had listened to her story, he wanted to imprison her stepmother, but she asked him for forgiveness. She said  “That would be my mother’s will, and it is the condition of our marriage.”